Unit 2 Authors note Draft 1

I feel like writing this paper went pretty well. I had a little trouble getting started, but I ended up feeling okay about it. I think I communicated my points in the paper, but I'm never sure if someone else reading it will understand. I also would like comments or suggestions on how to make my points clearer and how I could improve the organization. I also think the conclusion could be better, so I would like suggestions on how to improve that. Any other comments or suggestions are welcome and appreciated.