Author's Note: Public Space Analysis

This is the first draft of my paper. I am a little worried about this because I know it  is not long enough and there is a lot going on. I think I wrote down a lot of the things I was thinking about, but did not narrow it down to the most important  points to expand on. Today I think I need suggestions on what to cut out and what to focus/expand on. Also any comments/suggestions on the organization/flow of ideas.